"Kemarau Island"
This story comes from palembang, south sumatra Indonesia. we can get there by shift, ketek in local language, or by car from pusri"Bom Baru Harbour".
chinese people usually celebrate their new year over there goes to kemarau island. kemarau island is located in the middle of musi river.
in kemarau island we can find a tree of love. people believed that tree of love can find our love
it's just a mitos so believed or not it's depend on us.
it is said that there was a young prince from china named "Tan Bu An" and finally young prince met a beautiful girl nama Siti Fatimah and then they fell in love each other and they wanted to get married but Siti's parents didn't agree because they have the different ethnic and religion. and that is way people belive it is call it kemarau island, because the island is always dry even the river is tide
in kemarau island there is kelenteng" the place for chinese people do the pray
and in the kemarau island we can find many tree and food seller khas palembang
and also kemarau island has beautiful view so we can take picture as many as we want
if we want goes to kemarau island by shift we just paid 10 thausand rupiahs per person from BKB" benteng kuto besak".
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Nice L but I think on your title
BalasHapusmaybe you must all capital word or bold
Hehe
It's not "mitos", but it is "myth", and I think you should watch the punctuation. But it's good job :D
BalasHapusI think you much to plus 's' not many tree, but many trees. Good job sist...!!! Hehehe
BalasHapusI think that wrong"we can get there by shift, ketek in local language" =="We can go there by ship or Ketek"
BalasHapusand you write after not use capitalize word in your sentence.
good job my sista ;)
Ya same like nidya , mitos "myth" for the ketek you can use quotation "ketek" ,and for the last sentence ,we want to go to kemaro island .But I like your topic .thanks
BalasHapusi love kemarau island
BalasHapusI've already gotten there twice, lol......
BalasHapusYups, go ahead Ely, you're on the right track.
You just need to make some revision, especially for capitalizing for each sentences.
One more thing, you do not need to write Chinese people (Chinese=people of China)
Overall, it's a nice blog (and of course it's gonna be more interesting with the pictures on it, lol)